Meadow
by poetrydiary
A vibrant hillside;
people pass, preoccupied,
as cows dream of grass.
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A vibrant hillside;
people pass, preoccupied,
as cows dream of grass.
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poetry diary 
I love this one. I hope to be like your cows and dream of what is in front of me, and it’s goodness.
I like this. Both the passers by and the cows seem to be dreaming… 🙂
I like the softness in this one. Good work
Sad that passersby are preoccupied when there is a vibrant hillside to see! I want to notice.
Maybe that’s why they look so contented. Nice one.
I hope I’m not always preoccupied – I,too, want to dream. Very nice haiku.
ah!! green dreams..loved it…I too wanna join the dreamland
Lovely haiku.
Lovely! Every living creature dreams of something…
Last line is awesome…
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/cherished-moments.html
May we never be too preoccupied to notice the gifts that surround us.
No Meadow
So nicely written. I love it.
Lovely! The cows are wiser than those preoccupied ones 🙂
I love this–with a rhyme, no less!
So cool. You could have used this for grass as well.
really liking the last line