A vibrant hillside;
people pass, preoccupied,
as cows dream of grass.
For haiku heights September challenge.
I love this one. I hope to be like your cows and dream of what is in front of me, and it’s goodness.
I like this. Both the passers by and the cows seem to be dreaming… 🙂
I like the softness in this one. Good work
Sad that passersby are preoccupied when there is a vibrant hillside to see! I want to notice.
Maybe that’s why they look so contented. Nice one.
I hope I’m not always preoccupied – I,too, want to dream. Very nice haiku.
ah!! green dreams..loved it…I too wanna join the dreamland
Lovely! Every living creature dreams of something…
Last line is awesome…
May we never be too preoccupied to notice the gifts that surround us.
So nicely written. I love it.
Lovely! The cows are wiser than those preoccupied ones 🙂
I love this–with a rhyme, no less!
So cool. You could have used this for grass as well.
really liking the last line
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