Marooned
by poetrydiary
Abandoned shack
above the beach, with footprints
ending in the sea.
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For haiku heights September challenge. The prompt is a rather bleak ‘starve’.
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A truly sad story there, wonderful
Oh my, how sad this is. But wonderfully rendered. Thank you.
Full of imagery and loss. What a unique take on the prompt.
Deeply moving and unique take on this tough prompt! I liked it a lot!
Oh, this is so sad. You really caught the whole story in a few words.
Bleak, indeed, but beautifully written.
The sea as hunger tomb…
This is itching for a story to be told. Love it!
This one is so painfully beautiful !!!
it was a hard word to get a track on really liking your take
I follow those footprints as far as I can…
Starve
Beautifully penned
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/mamma-i-am-starving.html
What a sad story caught in a few words …
How tragic. Very well written
So spooky.
Very sad. Amazing how much can be captured in 3 short lines. Well done.
Compelling 🙂