Changing seasons
by poetrydiary
Clouds, like islands;
sanctuaries in summer skies,
submerged by autumn.
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For haiku heights September challenge. Today’s prompt is island. Also posted on the wonderful dVerse site.
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I have read so different haiku on island, but this one … leaves me in awe. What a wonderfully composed haiku.
What a lovely haiku. I especially like the line “sanctuaries in summer skies” So well done 🙂
this is wonderful … love the sky you paint
I would love to visit those cloud islands! Beautiful image!
This is a very different take…indeed creative.. thanks..
I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/she-cant-be-island.html#comment-form
RS:)
bravo much better than mine really liking it
I love this one, beautiful imagery, makes me ponder. Fantastic work!
Delightful … I really like the middle line. Thank you for sharing.
what a wicked cool way to look at the seasonal change…the submersion of the cloud islands….
Certainly a unique perspective on the clouds and the approaching season…
Nice haiku…I like the idea of seeing the clouds as islands.
a delight !
witty haiku.
how do you do?
hope to see you with poets rally today.
cheers,.
Your haiku are very good. like you I made a decision (don’t remember what year, but wrote haiku each day for 6 months. I also studied haiku at that time – it was a wonderful experience.
Thanks Liz – I find that the more I write, the more I learn. The discipline of regular writing comes and goes, though!