Autumn flames
by poetrydiary
Autumn lights the leaves;
trees flaming red-gold, smoke-soft,
until the first frost.
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For haiku heights September challenge. Today’s prompt is lights, and I saw a tree half-turned to red beside the road this morning.
lovely in it’s impermanence.
“Smoke soft’ how lovely! Evokes the fleeting nature of the season. Beautiful.
A lovely color of autumn, red-gold, smoke soft ~
Nice to meet you = ) Thank you for this beautiful peace.
Thats a very different take…
Lovely..
Details in relation to IBS America
Yes, enjoy the last few flings before we reflect what to do next when things are better! Nicely!
Hank
‘smoke-soft’ what a lovely description. Your haiku paints a very accurate picture of autumn.
A lovely evocative haiku
magical word painting.
Love it
I like “smoke soft.”
“lights” as a verb! Wonderful!
Three Lights
incredible.
very nice I can almost see the trees
Smoke-soft, as many others have pointed out already, is wonderful. A beautiful touch of autumnal beauty 🙂