Stars gathered to hear
new sounds in the darkness, but
it’s only a child.
For haiku heights September challenge.
I like the idea of stars gathering to listen in the darkness..nicely done
Stars gathering to listen. They wouldn’t be disappointed to hear a child, I think.
Nice twist in the ending line ~ Very nice ~
I, too, like the idea of stars gathering to listen.
Oh, I love it. To me it speaks of the ordinariness and at the same time extraordinariness of each child.
Lovely take on Milky Way
A very nice write
Beautiful take. Baby Jesus, perhaps?
Ahh! I like your take on the prompt. Very nicely imagined and written
Great haiku. I love the surprise of a child at the end.
I am left with more questions than answers—which is exactly what poetry should do!
ah, but that’s an evergreen sound 🙂
I see the child crying as earth. Beautiful poem.
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