At the seaside
by poetrydiary
That colourful stone,
disturbed by winter storms, turns
to sand in my shoe.
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That colourful stone,
disturbed by winter storms, turns
to sand in my shoe.
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poetry diary 
There is a tinge of tragic sadness in the colours of your haiku! Fascinating!
I agree with Gemma, she expressed the feeling of your haiku so well.
I love the contrast in images. Very nice!
Wow! Fantastic poem about change, impermanence! Well done!
This is what a haiku should be ~ simple with one clear thought ~ Lovely ~
Well done … a strong image written with so less words.
Exquisite! This little piece speaks to my soul!
The Color of Fire
I like the trippling from Stone to sand.
Image says a lot!
nice the absolute spirit of nature
Life is all about change! Excellent Haiku.
And then the sand turns to what?
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Turquoise Serpent
From stone to sand.. Hmm liked it..