Drawbridge
by poetrydiary
A squirrel pauses;
chestnut branch like a drawbridge,
defending summer.
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A squirrel pauses;
chestnut branch like a drawbridge,
defending summer.
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poetry diary 
Oh, that’s so good ..I can see the squirrel..wondering.. wow!!!
I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/08/wounded-walls-feel-safe.html#comment-form
I am right there!…watching your squirrel. Thanks
You gave it a new angle..nice!
I really love this one!
I love this, perfectly formed haiku and your words remind me of my squirrel neighbours here at home. Well done.
Awesome! You took the inspiration word to a whole new place.
Matthew, I love this Haiku! The imagery is delightful – I can picture this so easily in my mind. Beautifully worded! ~ Julie 🙂
that’s too good 🙂
Someone is Special
the best I have read so far…
http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/08/drawbridge-haiku.html
Does summer need to be defended? Perhaps. From squirrels! 🙂
Drawbridge
Sooo sweet this haiku! Lovely!
Creepy thorns to glistening petals
I watch my yard squirrels daily and can envision this scene!
I love this. It’s so good.
VERY nice!! 😉 It takes much for a squirrel to take a pause in its pursuit.
DrawBridge
There’s not enough squirrel poetry, I really liked your entry -Bruce