On the wreck of the Costa Concordia
by poetrydiary
Waters lapping at your door,
and your ceiling is the floor.
This fantasy you bought, built
on paper-trails and silt;
techno-arrogance, un-gilt
by respect for earth’s will –
has learnt her lesson now,
and bows.
So the waters lap softly and clear:
like kisses,
with fishes.
You will remind us for a week,
that we should be more meek.
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A very complicated and expensive piece of engineering and marketing tells a simple story in the Mediterranean.
a humbling lesson indeed. I wish the reminder would last longer than a week,though.
Indeed, and if only the world would take it to heart for a bit longer than a week… Fantastic poem, Matthew.
Writes like this will help us remember. Man and Machine…and what we have lost as our reliance upon them grows…oh, dear…I’m in a mood that’s turning every comment space into my personal soap box. I will refrain…and because I have to, it’s obvious the poetry has livened me up! Thought this a wonderful word play on recent events..
Finding sense in chaos is commendable. Thankfully, the loss of life was small compared to what it might have been. Thank you for remembering the dead.
you know…wisdom comes in the humbling…thank you for remembering and remind us to as well…nice touches in this…
so great…true and a very good reminder!
I love this write…nature reminding us to be more humble and meek ~
but we do forget easily, don’t we ?
The contrast of the glitter and hugeness of the liner with the water lapping kisses really says it all. Even so, (and I don’t think I would ever like a cruise) I feel bad for all those that were just wanting a vacation.
We always get ahead of ourselves don’t we and the arrogance of mankind is disturbing. A well expressed poem with a good message.