Waxing boots
by poetrydiary
I break the yellowed beeswax crust,
like muddied ice on moorland paths;
and fingers gather stubborn lumps,
which cling, like peat.
Roughened leather, weather-washed;
these boots have waited on the shelf –
two children, mortgages and jobs –
three decades since
first making fearless tracks through bogs.
I’ll start with rigid toes: scarred, scuffed,
consuming wax, and gritstone-hard
like Froggatt Edge.
Yellow runnels form, working back,
like sheep paths up on Kinder Scout,
but warm and fade to firming hands –
my fingers sting
from friction rather than raw cold;
and pleasures of secret valleys,
days’ ends and pack-less walks to pubs
awake again
as fingertips, now numb, relax
on yielding, loosened tongues; enjoy
eyelets and subtle seams, still etched
with nineties’ wax.
This scent is history and mud,
tired colours deepening like love –
massaged boots becoming landscapes;
laces, snow-waxed hills.
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Froggatt Edge and Kinder Scout (pronounced with a short ‘i’, like in India) are hills in Derbyshire, UK, near where I grew up. I used to do a lot of hill walking in my late teens and early 20s.
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Nice how those shoes remind you of walks decades ago.
You turn a chore of cleaning up those boots into something artistic and poetic ~ Love the sensory details of the valleys and seams ~
I could smell the wax and feel the old boots coming back to life. Well done!
I love this poem! I have a friend who was born and raised in Derbyshire,and your poem reminded me of her. I love how you evoke the smell of the wax and the feel of the boot leather, and how the boots become the landscape they tread. And there is so much poetry in British place names – a breath of fresh air!
Many thanks Kim – Derbyshire is such an ideal place for walking too: not too wild, but challenging enough for teenagers to feel they have escaped…happy memories!
‘This scent is history and mud, tired colours deepening like love’.. so beautiful!!❤
Love the way those boots would tell a story…
I really like these sections:
“and fingers gather stubborn lumps,
which cling, like peat”
“Yellow runnels form, working back,
like sheep paths up on Kinder Scout,
but warm and fade to firming hands –
my fingers sting
from friction rather than raw cold”
“as fingertips, now numb, relax
on yielding, loosened tongues; enjoy
eyelets and subtle seams, still etched
with nineties’ wax.
This scent is history and mud”
So … most of it. 😉 Really wonderful poetry.
Many thanks belle – I’ll keep working on the rest!
Nostalgic and emotive ..
Wonderful and evocative. Love the last verse