Local Government (after W H Auden*)
by poetrydiary
In Homeric disputation
With civil servants, in chorus,
From Departments of uncertain
Provenance and purpose,
A strangely passioned obstacle
I sit, attempting to fulfil
Great Birmingham and Solihull’s
Most democratic will.
By whose selection (ill-advised?)
I bring my radical appeal –
To officers and time-served staff,
In meetings rarely real.
And daily stand for ‘common-sense’
(Or sometimes things only I know)
From conference room to conference room
In rain, sunshine or snow.
Though warm my welcome everywhere,
Governments come and go so fast,
I cannot say from day to day
If policy will last.
Unless I speak of energy,
A world of which I know a touch,
When people know so little now,
I don’t need to say much.
It does, however, bother me,
When a government announcement
Fresh in from the great capital
– I’m sure it is well meant –
Misspells this proud old region’s name,
Confuses their East with our West;
So simply thus reminding us
That apathy is best.
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* This poem is a deliberate ‘parody’ of a poem by W H Auden called ‘On the Circuit’ which I’ve written as an exercise suggested on a poetry course I’m reading. Auden himself suggested writing parodies as the best way to understand the poetry of others.
‘On the Circuit’ has 16 stanzas in an 8,8,8,6 rhythmical pattern with the second and fourth lines always rhyming. I’m afraid I collapsed in exhaustion after 8 stanzas, but I’ve also tried to include some of his style with the odd obscure word and a gently ironic tone (?).
I have a voluntary role in one of our local government institutions here, and this poem describes it.
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Well done – and what a good write – the last two lines speak to all us bureaucrats ‘who’ve seen this all before’. Thanks also for the link – the Auden poem is a classic for us fussy old men.
Brilliant execution of the form 🙂 especially like “Misspells this proud old region’s name, confuses their East with our West; so simply thus reminding us that apathy is best.”
I can really sympathize with keeping it unchanged, to much changes back and forth will never work.
Congratulations getting to eight stanzas! I reads effortlessly.
Local and central governments are stubborn mules, who if not blind, wear blindfolds.
I live in that cold dark place some know as the north-east – but as far as central government are concerned, is on another planet.
I admire that you have taken a voluntary role – your patience must wear thin at times?
Anna :o]
It does! Although if I say that impatience is generally trumped by the sense that there is an outside chance of possibly helping something worthwhile to happen, I am contradicting the final lines of my own poem….(but it’s true) 🙂
Thanks for your comment.
Matthew
This parody reads out very well Matthew ~ Governments change so fast, I wonder what has been achieved, and if its good for the people ~
So well said and parodied. Governments do change so fast, but then red tapes will stay red. Form nicely done.