On stage (dream)
by poetrydiary
A rising curtain;
hubbub dying like a breeze –
my moment. I sneeze.
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For September Haiku Heights – today’s prompt is ‘dread’.
A rising curtain;
hubbub dying like a breeze –
my moment. I sneeze.
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For September Haiku Heights – today’s prompt is ‘dread’.
it sounds a little funny, right?
Yes..so possibly not quite communicating a sense of dread as originally intended, but I think it became less serious as I wrote it. It still started from the prompt though 🙂 (!).
That sneeze came in quite handy, I’d say, saving you from a dreaded moment. (Or did I misread?)
Dreading
Funny and nerve-wracking at the same moment. Thank you!
Better to sneeze than freeze.. it keeps you warmer..,
A nice take.. I enjoyed it..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/09/a-long-wait-ahead-haiku.html
RS:)
I agree with RS ……… enjoyable haiku 🙂
Oooooh…how dreadfully embarrassing. Good one!
So simple and nice, and a smile for this one!! It must be the dust in the curtains…;)
The sneezing…….Touch wood! God bless you.
Funny take – sounds like one of my nightmares!
That is a true moment of dread 🙂
LOL!