Inventory, in a time of war
by poetrydiary
Blackened stonework, damp;
shell casings (scattered) like leaves;
floating feathers, white.
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For September Haiku Heights – today’s prompt is ‘dove’.
Blackened stonework, damp;
shell casings (scattered) like leaves;
floating feathers, white.
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For September Haiku Heights – today’s prompt is ‘dove’.
Very moving. Beautifully done.
I agree with Susan. Very timely. Very poignant
Love the atmosphere you’ve evoked.
The imagery speaks for itself. It is quite astonishing that with the given prompt, so many of us have had similar ideas i.e. concerning war and peace.
Brilliant haiku, though. Loved it.
That is so beautiful. It explains everything. Loved the last line.
Gaurang
such a powerful imagery… beautiful
Excellent and deep thinking!! Loved it!!
May guns rest in peace
Sight the velvet rose in hand
Doves of glory fly
Brilliant imagery…….
Chillingly true and needed in our day. Thank you!
An excellent reminder of the horrors of war. Well done!