In the undergrowth
by poetrydiary
A damp leaf twitches;
mist rises up the valley.
Another leaf moves.
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For September Haiku Heights – today’s prompt is ‘frogs’.
A damp leaf twitches;
mist rises up the valley.
Another leaf moves.
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For September Haiku Heights – today’s prompt is ‘frogs’.
Subtle and delicately drawn…a real haiku (unlike mine:)
mystery is all around…….
Good one and leaves a lot to imagination..loved it..
I invite you too for my 800th post for Haiku Heights here..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/my-800th-post-and-haiku.html
RS
Beautifully written, a lovely haiku moment ~
Silent mover? Nice way of bringing the frog in, without even mentioning the word frog.
Gaurang
Love the mystery around the quagmire!!
I am happy to see you again, Matthew! I’ve been MIA lately and I’ve missed your poetry. Looking forward to your September haiku! –Karin
Wonderfully atmospheric. Well done.