Fallen rose petals;
their warm wet scent embracing
lovers sensing rain.
I have a pergola with a white climbing rose in my garden. It is beautiful, and it has rained this week. The rest is imagination.
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What a beautiful image! I can smell the warm scent!
So beautifully carved
beautiful and I can smell the fragrance of the roses.
Their warm wet scent are all over my room now. Beautiful. 🙂
A short poem, but so sense-ually evocative. Your words made me picture that rose with its fallen petals. And how lovely to describe them as lovers seeking rain! Very nice.
exquisite. especially the last line.
hmm, love the combination of rose petals and rain… and their scent. lovely.
nice….evocative….love the rain and it can def stir amor….
ahhhhh … this is one to inhale…. deeply 🙂
This creates such vivid imagery…well done!
We have a pergola with clematis climbing all over it. The recent storms and torrential rains did their part in stripping the blooms…so this piece really resonated. Just beautiful.
This is so refreshing to read! What a lovely picture it makes in my mind. 🙂
Beautiful. And how lovely to have a pergola. Tres romantic:)
This is beautiful!!
Ah the scent of love…..so elegantly described!Tanka Whirl
This poem is filled with natural beauty and hope…
A pleasing read.
Lovely dreamy words – made me sigh with pleasure.