The knowledge of spring
by poetrydiary
Released by a single coal tit
(lost in the patient scaffold
of a waiting tree) whose song
softens pale sunlight, stroking
white façades and blinking windows,
and stirring me to cross the street,
perhaps.
It’s in the edge and ebbing fall, too,
of that hedge’s shadow
on a fading snowdrop
beside a dozing fox;
her orange pelt and gently pulsing chest
creating warmth (while she lies still)
for all – her eyes half-closed,
she dreams of cubs.
I close my collar to the cold,
pull on my gloves and stamp
impatiently, which does no good;
the grass remains un-grown, un-mown,
and damp;
pavements hard, earth dark, skies still.
But then I draw a single breath;
onto my tongue it comes,
and I can taste it too.
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Posted on Poets United.
Very nice.Especially like that last stanza.
Very nicely written.
I’m just bouncing around–you have such great sensual poetry, stamping, tasting–the second and last stanzas are fabulous 🙂
It conveys the scene clearly (if coldly!).
love this piece – and not just because coal tits and foxes are favourite visitors to my garden. There is an evocation of something beyond the moment that only specific details can really hint at. The clarity of a haiku and the flow of a longer lyric. Great piece.
Very nice and springlike. Nightingale, coal tit, gold crest — all I seem to get is pigeons shrieking. You are fortunate, And my first gardening day has started with a plague of greenfly. So I think I’ll hand Spring back this year.
We’d all like a taste of spring…
I love the fox dreaming of cubs, the grass ungrown, the impatience, the gloves, and….in the end….the taste of spring!
Very lovely! Spring is such a wonderful time. I enjoyed this telling of the anticipation of it.
This is beautiful…that yearning for spring can be so strong, at least for me! You’ve conveyed that in a truly wonderful way. Thank you for sharing!
Oh I adore the dozing fox dreaming of cubs. You took me right there.
This knowledge savored is wisdom.
The last stanza is powerful. Could stand alone. Nice work.
The River
I enjoyed ever sensation you created, in every line. Beautiful representation of early spring, with lingering chill!