In between seasons,
wind searching between the trees;
the birds have gone south.
The image of wind searching is absolute perfection.
They have indeed ~ Lovely haiku ~
Nicely done. Think I will stay south of the equator, though.
Oh yes! I can see this…the wind searching for the birds! I, too, am looking for them!
Excellent…. Poor wind cannot find his companions in a wicked winter! Very fine haiku.
Oh, my goodness! The wind searching for absent birds—what a disappointing experience (but what a delightful read)!
Beggar and Buddha
Sometimes those in-between places hold delightful surprises, like your haiku,
And tthe birds have come here to Florida. Nice depiction of February happenings. I always have to have plenty planned for this month or I begin to sink. Now I see it is an in-between season…between the best of seasons.
lovely.vivid, true and moving.
It seems that you gazed out my back windows and wrote this petite piece.
I love the idea of the wind searching between the trees – a fresh and unusual idea!
Beautiful in its simplicity.
I like how you personified the wind in this haiku. A wonderful piece, perfect for February indeed.
I like the wind searching, as we do, often after we have chased away the very thing we seek.
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