To the New Year
by poetrydiary
I will allow
the slow spiral
of my life
to take one more turn,
as if unscrewing
the cap on a bottle
of New World wine
of uncertain maturity
and depth;
or perhaps like the more brutal bite
of steel thread
into the yielding, cautious cork
of an aging claret,
not knowing when,
without warning,
it might give,
and pop.
And then I will drink,
heartily, and with other people’s wine,
to this year to come.
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May you all have a very good 2013. Salut!
smiles…drink it up…nice how the form accentuates the unscrewing in this….an with other peoples wine as well…ha…happy new year…
Your words: Wonderful form. . . and FUNCTION!
Very nice….With drinking to every ending comes a new beginning. Happy New Year!
Like the weaving of forms, like uncorking the bottle of wine ~
Cheers and Happy New Year ~
oh love the form of this. uplifting and sparkling your verse is. Happy New Year to you 🙂
your poem is like a sparkling wine ~ delicious!
hoping the new year exceeds your expectations!
♥
Oh I love the spiral of your words and their shape and especially enjoy the SLOW spiral – Savor it, poetry-diary, savor it! Happy New Year!
Matthew–I loved the form of these words spiraling, perhaps as one unturns a cork upwards from the bottle….surely your intent–well done! And a Happy New Year to you, sir.
Such a great use of form! Lovely–and happy new year to you!
Nicely done…super writing to bring to life a fine idea. Much enjoyed. Happy New Year.
the turning of the screw… 😉 form and metaphor done to perfection..
Well done… cheers… happy 2013!
Oh this is nice…really enjoyed this, perfect for the new year. Happy 2013 🙂
Very nice… Happy new year 🙂
Anticipation successfully captured. Thanks.
Great analogy -==- especially the final sharing.
smiles..i like the spiral and unscrewing the new year image here..ha..don’t drink too much of these other people’s wine though…smiles…happy new year