Napoleon at Waterloo
by poetrydiary
One day the English will feel this too:
our heart beats blurring into drums,
that are no more than wave falls, like on Elba;
blue and breaking on the reddened shore.
Why lift our hands or eyes to smoking hills?
They all know what they do and why.
Long past feeling cannonballs and heads
rolling and falling; grateful only to be un-dead
a moment longer. And to hope. It was on the road
to Laffray this fight was lost: hope and romance against guns,
and love against logic. So now they fight
from deeper dreams, timeless and beyond defeat
in this world or the next. Nothing we can do
can kill that hope; the tactics of Austerlitz
and Jena known, the day undone. We know our role,
they know their place; the grass, and blood.
Clouds like lava, flowing from the West;
we must play our part, into that volcano sun.
This is our final moment, we cannot betray
future believers and our myth ā all that remains:
to make an end, let it begin ā forward our loyal Guard.
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I’ve been feeling in a historical romantic mood this weekend.
Historical notes: Laffray was the village where Napoleon opened his coat to the King’s troops when returning from Elba and invited them to shoot him, and they changed sides. Jena and Austerlitz two of his greatest victories. The final (hopeless) attack of the never-defeated Old Guard at Waterloo is one of the great romantic moments of history (although not necessarily for those there). Napoleon’s strange lethargy on the day of the battle has often been commented on.
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So now they fight
from deeper dreams, timeless and beyond defeat
in this world or the next.
Just beautiful writing!
into that volcanic sun… great line. Great poem.
“to make an end, let it begin . . .” One of the very best lines I’ve read lately. There is no beginning, no ending – only eternity and you’ve captured that eloquently. Wonderful poem.
P.S. So glad to hear you’re feeling historical and not hysterical
I loved how you wove historical detail into this poem and then explained a bit at the end, so those of us who were a bit ‘rusty’ would understand better. Nice!
I believe such a poem should be incorporated into teaching history. What a great way to bring the human into the mere facts…
Agree.
as one who has always been fascinated by Napoleon, this piece has special resonance.loved the entire monologue.you really got into the mood.
Your poem is like walking over an historic battlefield in a dream, seeing it all. It is strangely moving. I especially loved “grateful to be un-dead a moment longer.’ It is amazing to me that soldiers know the outcome and yet they go into battle in spite of it!
I always enjoy poetry that teaches an historical lesson or highlights a future possibility. You’ve done both in this flowing piece.
Poems about historical events are special works of art in my opinion. Nicely done!
I love “our heart beats blurring into drums” and “they know their place; the grass, and blood.”
Love the historic affect you weaved into as you told the tale, learned something new thanks to you!
wow…really moving piece…particularly the context it is put in with that last stanza…would certainly motivate me to take that next step…which may have been my last….
Nice weaving of words, specially the opening stanza ~ Its a challenge to write poetry out of historical notes, but you did it very well ~