Two people in spring,
like hummingbirds, edging
towards their first kiss.
For haiku heights September challenge. Today’s prompt is hummingbird.
Perfect description of the heightened energy around first kiss. PERFECT, PERFECT, PERFECT!
I really like imagining lovers as hummingbirds 😉
Ah..those were the days! Perfect capture of a magical event!
that’s really good can relate
Very sweet. The energy of those days was wonderful. Well done 🙂
Oh, very sweet.
The lovely meeting of two faces compared to humming bird. Good. Lovely.
A clever tale on the prompt and a nice thought.
Sweet romantic twist to the prompt. Nice.
Very very romantic!!! Loved it… 🙂
wonderful. I can see the energy.
Ahhh – very evocative
awww myy gosshh…this is BEAUTIFUL!! I loved it. So cute, I really cant get over this haiku, its amazing!! 😀
Tenderness and tentativeness!
Perfect! I love the simile.
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