Young love
by poetrydiary
Two people in spring,
like hummingbirds, edging
towards their first kiss.
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For haiku heights September challenge. Today’s prompt is hummingbird.
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Perfect description of the heightened energy around first kiss. PERFECT, PERFECT, PERFECT!
I really like imagining lovers as hummingbirds 😉
Ah..those were the days! Perfect capture of a magical event!
that’s really good can relate
Sweet 🙂
Very sweet. The energy of those days was wonderful. Well done 🙂
Oh, very sweet.
The lovely meeting of two faces compared to humming bird. Good. Lovely.
A clever tale on the prompt and a nice thought.
Sweet romantic twist to the prompt. Nice.
Very very romantic!!! Loved it… 🙂
wonderful. I can see the energy.
Ahhh – very evocative
awww myy gosshh…this is BEAUTIFUL!! I loved it. So cute, I really cant get over this haiku, its amazing!! 😀
Tenderness and tentativeness!
Hummingbird Heaven
Perfect! I love the simile.