Maybe
by poetrydiary
She walks, glancing back,
her summer dress a shifting
symphony of silk.
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For haiku heights September challenge. The prompt is symphony.
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I love the way her dress becomes musical! Nice
Oh, this is lovely–the musicality of silk.
I can sense a wonderful story there. Captivating! 🙂
Wow! Beautiful images here and lots of music too! I enjoy your unique perspective!!
The musical of silk … great imagery.
A very vivid image, I like it!
nice…the symbolism in this is really cool…it does a pretty picture straight away but to me it feels like hte passing of seasons…
I can picture that dress, the music and the dance of it. Lovely haiku.
Lovely haiku, but the title really makes it.
loved it i could almost see it in my mind
wow!! flowing
lovely, with vivid imagery. Very well written
Wow! loved the sensuous word-picture.
O love the musicality of your work–I noticed it in the first piece that I read for Dverse–and this is just outstanding!
Symphony of silk… oh what beautiful imagery! 🙂
Really lovely…
-Eva
sublime!
http://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/
Swish, swish, swish…
Symphony of Seeds
I was showing my husband some of the haiku for September Heights and he wanted me to be sure to leave a comment how much he liked yours!! 🙂 Me, too!
Oh!! – thank you so much.
I love the sound of silk … especially when it swooshes!!!
September Heights – Repertoire of Notes
I can not stop staring at her