Song of the Forest
by poetrydiary
I tremble as you touch me,
as you run through my trees;
and I long to embrace you
with my dew-dampened leaves.
My breathing follows seasons
and my rhythms are slow;
changing light into water
for the creatures below.
And you?
You of the quick boughs and sliding roots:
you race with the sunbeats, but don’t know what you seek.
I try to speak.
Sometimes we touch – we knew each other once,
and breathed together.
I tremble as you touch me,
as you run through my trees;
and I long to embrace you,
with my dew-dampened leaves.
Beautiful and lovingingly gentle. I really like the feelings expressed in the stanza!
absolutely lovely…love the opening stanza and that you repeat it…the nature imagery mixed in with the love…really cool…and works so well…
I like the tender touch and song ~ The use of trees and seasons make the longing even more heart felt ~
The first and last stanzas tie it all nicely ~
Grace
Love this…
I tremble as you touch me,
as you run through my trees;
and I long to embrace you,
with my dew-dampened leaves.
Great lines!
bneautiful