After the time of the bees
by poetrydiary
It was after the time of the bees
she bloomed alone, a single rose
among thorns; scented and white, I see
her petals, pink-edged in the dawn light
of those final days.
I could have wings, and buzz, a bit, at
least – or hum. My shorts are yellow too
and I have a stripy shirt. I like
honey, and flowers, and I dream of meadows,
despite my being a man.
So I landed on your petals, and
sipped your dew. Scented with longing, you
helped me sleep, and we dreamed together
alone, of times of bees and roses,
until your petals fell.
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“Scented with longing, you
helped me sleep, and we dreamed together
alone” – The whole poem is painfully beautiful, this line especially.
I like this one. It’s simple, true and not too flowery (she says with tongue just a little in cheek.) A flower poem without the floweriness!
Oh sad about the petals falling off!
Anna :o]
this is a tender write..sipping the dew…nice…a bit sad ending with the petals falling…some things should last forever..
I like the metaphor of the bees and the petals…your last verse is lovely.
Your words are always a joy to read ~
Great to see you at D’verse ~
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Grace
Enjoyed this… especially the second stanza.
that last line caught me off guard a bit…i was feeling all warm and then the petals fell…all too real…nice write…
I wasn’t sure what to think of the last line. Beautiful poem!
How sad that her petals fell off…though I suppose only plastic flowers keep their petals forever.
Nice write!